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    Dil Mein Aur To Kya....

    Dil mein aur to kya rakha hai
    Tera dard chhupa rakha hai
    Itne dukhon ki taiz hawa mein
    Dil ka deep jala rakha hai
    Dhoop se chehron ne duniya mein
    Kya andhair machaa rakha hai
    Is nagri ke kuchh logon ne
    Dukh ka naam dawa rakha hai
    Waada e yaar ki baat na chhairo
    Yeh dhoka bhi kha rakha hai
    Bhool jaao beeti baatein
    In baaton mein kya rakha hai
    Chup chup kyun rehte ho Nasir
    Yeh kya rog laga rakha hai......


    ((Nasir Kazimi))



     



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    I have one more :

    Mujhe Azmane Wale Mujhe Azman ke Roye
    Meri Dastane Hasrat Suna Suna ke Roye

    Teri Bewafaiyon Par, Teri Kaj Adaiyon Par
    Kabhi Sar chupa Ke Roye, Kabu Munh Chupa Ke Roye

    Jo Sunai Anjuman Men Shab-e0 Gham Ki Aab-biti
    Kabhi Ro ke Muskaraye, Kabhi Muskara Ke Roye

    Main Hun Be-Watan Musafir, Mera Naam Bekasi Hai
    Mera Koi Bhi Nahin Hai Jo Gale Laga Ke Roye

    Mere Paas Se Guzar Kar Mera Haal Tak Na Poocha
    Main Yeh Kaise Maan Jaun Ke Woh Dur Ja KE Roye

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    nice but in ghazal u wrote, u started with wrong order of lines in 1st couplet n then made little mistakes later in it...now look at this one:

    Meri dastan e hasrat woh suna suna ke roye
    Mere azmane wale mujhe azma ke roye
    Koi aisa ehl e dil ho ke fasana e mohabbat
    Main use suna ke ro'un wo mujhe suna ke roye
    Meri arzu ki duniya dil e natawan ki hasrat
    Jise kho ke shadman thay usay aaj pa ke roye
    Jo sunai anjuman mein shab e ghum ki aap beeti
    Kai ro ke muskuraye kai muskura ke roye
    Teri bewafaiyon par teri kuj adaiyon par
    Kabhi munh chhupa ke roye kabhi sar jhuka ke roye
    Main hoon be watan musafir mera naam be kasi hai
    Mera koi bhi nahin hai jo gale laga ke roye
    Mere paas say guzar kar mera haal tak na poochaa
    Main yeh kaise maan jaaon ke woh door ja ke roye
    Kahin Saif raaste mein woh milein to un se kehna
    Main udaas hoon akela mere paas aa ke roye...

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    amazing yr....bht zabardast....

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    buhut khob...

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    thnx,,,,,rizwan n beauty queen....

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    Bahut khob

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    very nice sharing....

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