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    My Poetry

    Hi everyone! Here's my recently written ghazal...m sharing with all of u frnds here on nidokidos....
    Translation in English is for people like haily who don't know much urdu....

    Rahe aagay musalsal hum tumhein khush haal karne mein
    Kasar chhori nahin tum ne shikasta haal karne mein

    Diya dukh tha teri khaatir kabhi hum ne azeezon ko
    Raha na yaad tujh ko kuchh laga ik pal bichharne mein

    Zamana rok le chahe mohabbat se magar samjhe
    Ke parwa jaan ki karta nahin parwana jalne mein

    Tu mujh ko sochta ho ga main yeh rakhta tasalli hoon
    Magar lamha hi kaafi hai khayalon ke badalne mein

    ‘Mufakkir’ yaad humdam ki mere dil se hai wabasta
    Wagarna na maza jeene mein thehra na hi marne mein...


    ((Malik Saleem Iqbal 'Mufakkir'))

    TRANSLATION:::

    1st couplet: I always tried to make u feel happy n satisfied...
    But in reply,u did all ur best to give me worries...


     


    2nd couplet: Hey u kindless! Once, I had hurt my close relatives just for u...
    But u didn’t remember anything, u didn’t take long to leave me...

    3rd couplet: Let these people stop us from love but they must understand...
    A moth is destined to burn in flames, it doesn’t care about its life...

    4th couplet: I remain hopeful that I’m in ur heart n so u think about me but...
    Sometimes even a single moment is enough to bring change in thoughts...

    5th couplet: ‘Mufakkir’!(i.e my poetry nick) Its just that my companion’s/beloved’s thoughts r stuck to my heart...
    Otherwise there's nothing so interesting in my life or death....

    ((Malik Saleem Iqbal 'Mufakkir'))



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    hmmmmmmm very nice

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    thnx hunain.....

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    buhut khob..
    zaberdast...keep it up...

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    WOW superb dear...u r very nice poet......
    i wud lyk 2 read ur more poems ...very nice...lovely!!!

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    thnx lina n muskan...

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    WOW superb dear...u r very nice poet......
    i wud like 2 read ur more poems ...very nice...lovely!!!
    wow i love it it,s the best well done malik

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    thnx Rabia.....

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    no problem

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    thank u soo much for the pm nd notifying me with ur latest poetry.. i must say it truly is worth taking the time nd reading it...

    and thank you sooo much for translating it.. i feel soo special now.. that is really sweet of you.

    you are translating your entire poem for me. i remember asking some of the members to translate one line for me, nd there respond was like "oh Hails, its nothing special " Thank you malik.. and a very beautiful poem.

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