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    Ajeeb shaks tha jaane kia chahta tha~*~

    Ajeeb shaks tha jaane kia chahta tha~*~
    Khud se juda kar ke maar dalna chahta tha...


     


    Saahil ki rait per likhta tha woh mera naam...
    Phir usay lehron se bachana bhi chahta tha...

    Woh dard deta tha mujhe jee bhar ke...
    Or mujhe hansta hoa dekhna bhi chahta tha...

    Apni saari wafain woh kisi or ke naam kar ke...
    Mujh se hamesha wafa ki umeed bhi chahta tha...

    Parindon ke paron ko kaat kar woh...
    Phir un ko urta hoa dekhna bhi chahta tha...

    Meri kabar per aa kar raqeeb ke sang woh...
    Mujhe sukoon se leta hoa dekhna bhi chahta tha...

    Mujhe woh apna,rakhna chahta tha hamesha...
    Or khud kisi or ka ho jana bhi chahta tha...



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    hmmm too good masoom....every line is beautiful

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    bohat khoob masoom

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    very kool....

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    Hey masoom,
    really nice ....
    Jisne bhi likha hai taarif ke kaabil hai

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    thanks all of ya
    yup kirandeep right..

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    zalim tha woh, aur zulm ki adat bhi bahut thi
    majbur the hum, us se muhabbat bhi bahut thi....

    us but ke sitam seh ke dikha hi diya hum ne
    go apni tabiyat mein bagawat bhi bahut thi......

    wakif hi na tha ramz-e-muhabbat se woh warna
    dil ke liye thori si inaayat bhi bahut thi.....

    yun hi nahi mashur-e-zamana mera katil
    us shakhs ko is fan mein maharat bhi bahut thi...

    kya daur-e-ghazal tha, ke lahu dil mein bahut tha
    aur dil ko lahu karne ki fursat bhi bahut thi.....

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    humm nice one sunny

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    thanks ajnabee bhai.......

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    arey ji rehnay bhi dijeay ...
    aur suna ..
    howz work gng
    when u gonna b free.. .

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