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    first shair of my life.......

    ok guys....pehli bar shair likh rahi hoon...hope u will like this......my fingers r crossed....
    so here i go...


    apni shairi main tera zikar baar baar karein ge
    teri chaht se kabhi na inkaar karein ge
    caho naa tum humhein to koi baat nae
    wafain phir bhi hum tum pe nisaar karein ge


     



    hope u all will like...



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    zabardastt
    superb!!!!
    aapne khud likhi hai?

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    kuch help frend se bhi li thi........thank u dear....
    kaisi ho aap bohat time ho gaya aap se baat nae ki...aur wese "hurrey" pe party join karo...

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    Awsome... if this is ur first, I wonder how cool the next ones will be

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    Quote Originally Posted by kool devil
    kuch help frend se bhi li thi........thank u dear....
    kaisi ho aap bohat time ho gaya aap se baat nae ki...aur wese "hurrey" pe party join karo...
    hmm good try
    weldone
    mai theek hon
    mai toh ate hon
    aap nahi hote
    khair
    all the best
    waiting for ur other poems

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    i hve posted my other poems....check them also....
    n thank alot morpheus for such a kool comment....my dsl was not working that is why i was unable to come to this forum...

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    ahem ok sure
    hmm ok never mind
    welcome back

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    thats a brilliant start...

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    bohat achhi shuruat he
    mazzzzzzzaaaaaaa aaaaaaaaagayaaaaaaaa

    next shairy jaldi post jarna faraz wait kar raha he

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    thank u so much 4 such nyc comments......
    aapp logo ko nae pata kitna socha he main ne shair likhne k liye........

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