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    dard kisi gair ke liye

    Ek tum ke dil mein dard kisi gair ke liye
    Ek ham ke dard ban gaye khud aap ke liye


     


    Ham apne aashiyane mein tere muntazir
    Tum tinke chun rahe the kisi aur ke liye

    Ham jaante hain dil mein tumhare nahin hain ham
    Jo khat tumhari aankhon mein the ham ne parh liye

    Gham hai ke tu ne loot liya aitmad ko
    Ek daag de diye hain hamen umr ke liye

    Qaatil ki is adaa pe bhi qurban jaye
    Khud de ke zehar aankhon mein aansoo bhi bhar liye

    Thi kaun si khataa ke mili jis ki ye saza
    Ham ne to umr bhar tere naqsh-e-qadam liye

    "Azra" ye mana bojh hai ab tujh pe zindagi
    Par zindagi to teri nahin hai tere liye

    (Azra Adil Rashid



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    very good very good
    keep it up
    last line is ur name ?

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    nope yr
    poet's name hai

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    bahuth khoob...


    Na sang-e-meel tha koi na koi naqsh-e-qadam
    Tamaam umr hawa ki tarah safar mai rahey

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    wah wah kia baat hai sir!!
    only two lines mei sub kuch expalin karte hai yeh poem

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    wo tho hai...

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    yeah really NICE ONE Masoom

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    very good...umdah

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    Masoom ji
    hamesha achi poetry hi post karti hein
    yani UMDA

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    yes ajnabee is true masoom is a really good poet...chaa gai ho..

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