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    JALA DAALO

    JALA DAALO


     


    udasi tarak ker do ab
    younhi baikaar mat baitho
    kisI kE hijar mein jaana
    na khud ko itna tarpao
    udasi aik shola hai
    gharon ko jo jalata hai
    agar jal ja'ay to baqi
    nahi rehta hai phir kuch bhi
    meri mano.........
    woh saray khat jo us nay tum ko likhay thay
    jala daalo
    tumhein jis ne bhula daala
    usay tum bhi bhula daalo...........!!



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    udaasi tark kar di ab
    bacha na ab kuchh bhi
    jalaa daale saare khat
    bacha na ab wo bhi
    par muskurana ab bhi hai mushkil
    aankhe namm rahte hain ab bhi
    chalo bhula daala use
    par jeen aab ho gaya hai aur bhi mushkil
    ek yaadon ki rassi thaame chal rahe they
    lo chood diya wo bhi ....



    this is my first attempt please hansna mat

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    wow bahut khob

    sochain badal jain dil nahi badla karta
    insan marjata hi rista nahi badla karta
    ab ki likhoo ghazal koi tu kushi ki likhna
    mujh sey gham ab tera dost saha nahi jata

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    keep it up
    aur
    continue it down

    hahahahahhaaha
    just joking

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    ?????????

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    continue it down :- means samajh mein nahin aa raha hai ke yeh complete ho gaya ya kuchh aur issme add karoon

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    hmm choice is urssssssss

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    now (today night) i m going on a official trip for a week.
    insha ALLAH by next week my first ever lines will get published on nido

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    hmmm
    happy journey
    good luck n enjoy
    take care
    m also leaving

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    woh saray khat jo us nay tum ko likhay thay
    jala daalo
    tumhein jis ne bhula daala
    usay tum bhi bhula daalo...........!!

    NICE 1 MASSOM JI

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