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    Tum Jo hotey .......

    Tum jo hote to humein kitna sahara hota
    Hum nay na yuen dukh mein auron ko pukara hota

    Jitni shid'dat say mein wabasta tha tum say
    Kis tarha mera tere baad guzzara hota

    Muj ko ye sooch he kafi hai jalane ke liye
    Mein na hota to koe aur tumhara hota

    Aur hum baith kar kamoishi say roye hote
    Shaam hoti kisi daraya ka kinara hota


     


    Dil say dekhi nahi jati thi kamoshi ghar ki
    Kiss tarha ujara howa shehar ganwara hota

    Chand hota keh meri jaan sitara hota
    Hum nay ek tere siwa dil say uthra hota

    Tu nay soocha hai kabie kitna muhabat ke bagair
    Rooh farsa dil waeera ka nazaara hota

    (Farhat Abbas Shah)



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    Jugnoo too good,,,,,i really liked it specially this one

    Jitni shid'dat say mein wabasta tha tum say
    Kis tarha mera tere baad guzzara hota

    Muj ko ye sooch he kafi hai jalane ke liye
    Mein na hota to koe aur tumhara hota



    too good

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    Shukhriya janab .... is ki shru ki 6 lines waqee bohat achi hain ...

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    no doubt.... zaberdast ghazal...or pehli kuch lines to bus chaa gai hain...

    jugnoo aap b chaa gaey hain is ghazal sameit... too good...

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    lemme add 1 more...





    Shaam K Baad....




    Tu ney dekha hai kabhi ik nazar shaam k baad
    Kitney chupchap sey lagatey hain shajar shaam k baad

    Itney chup chap k raastey bhi rahein gey la-ilm
    Chor jayein gey kisi roz nagar shaam k baad

    Main ney aisey hi gunaah teri judaai mein kiye
    Jaisey tofaan mein koii chor de ghar shaam k baad

    Shaam sey pehley vo mast apni urraano'n mein raha
    Jis k haathon mein they TooTey hoe per shaam k baad

    Raat beeti to giney aabley or phir sochaa
    Kon thaa ba-e-sey aghaz-e-safar shaam k baad

    Tu hai suraj tujhe maaloom kahaN raat ka dukh
    Tu kisi roz mere ghar mein utar shaam k baad

    LoT aaye na kisi roz vo aavaaraa mijaaz
    khol rakhtey hain isi aas pey der shaam k baad

    (Farhat Abbas Shah)

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    wah...........kia baat hai..........very nice

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    thnx zara and sunny ...

    Khush rahiye ....

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    Quote Originally Posted by jugnoo
    thnx zara and sunny ...

    Khush rahiye ....


    acha dada ji...

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    my pleasure bhai..........u too

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    Samay samay ki Khalish mein tera malaal rahe
    Judaeyon mein bhi yeon aalam-e-visaal rahe

    Anaa ki jang mein ham jeet to gaye lekin
    Phir us ke baad bahut der tak nidhaal rahe

    Ra'he junoo'n mein yahi zaad-e-rah hota hai
    K justaju barhey deewangi bahaal rahe

    Hasin raatein bhi mehakein tumhaari yaadon se
    Kade dino'n mein bhi pal pal tera Khayal rahe

    Tu ek baar zra kashtiyan jala to sahi
    Hai kia majal k aik lamha bhi zavaal rahe

    (Farhat Abbas Shah)

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