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    Tear's Plead ....

    It may not be the nicely written poem but the unique and rare concept has really attracted me .....
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    Drop of tear came out and asked to heart ....
    Why did you call me out?
    Why are you so sad and feeling lonely?
    Heart didn't answer
    Than drop pleaded

    Never call me out because
    I want to live in you

    Never feel lonely because
    I am always with you

    Never become sad because
    no1 but me cares about you

    I was with you when you were born
    I will be with you till you die

    I feel bad when you use me just to cry
    as if i am just a water that gets dry

    I know i can't make you feel happy
    for that i can only curse my destiny

    Don't make me hate for my own existence
    Don't ever cry again
    if u don't wanna see me in pain

    I wish i could die before u r sad
    and never let things go bad .....

    I still want to live in you ....
    Ever and Forever
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    I've something more to share about this poem - but first Ur Comments, Please .....


     





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    Hey

    Hey there...i amit that this poem somehow had gain my attention. I like the way it explain and questions....In deed it is an interesting one...

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    thanks dear ...

    welcome on board - hope u enjoy your stay ....

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    very nice buddy...

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    thanks dear

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    zaberdst.... kia ye aaap ki apni poem hai... and what else u want to share about this poem with us????

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    brilliant post yar....

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    thank sunny and zara .....

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    Quote Originally Posted by sveetzara
    zaberdst.... kia ye aaap ki apni poem hai... and what else u want to share about this poem with us????
    well sort of ...

    i mean the first few lines of this poem are written by my net friend time ago - attracted by the rare concept i added rest of the lines .... but stillI prefer giving credits and copyrights to original writter ...

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