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    A touching love story




     



    10th Grade:-
    As I sat there in English class,
    I stared at the girl next to me.
    She was my so called 'best friend'.
    I stared at her long, silky hair,
    and wished she was mine.
    But she didn't notice me like that,
    and I knew it.
    After class,
    she walked up to me and asked me for
    the notes she had missed the day before.
    I handed them to her.She said 'thanks'
    and gave me a kiss on the cheek.
    I want to tell her, I want her to know
    that I don't want to be just friends,
    I love her but I'm just too shy,
    and I don't know why.
    11th grade:-
    The phone rang. On the other end,
    it was her. She was in tears,
    mumbling on and on about how
    her love had broke her heart.
    She asked me to come over
    because she didn't want to be alone, So I did.
    As I sat next to her on the sofa, I stared at her
    soft eyes, wishing she was mine.
    After 2 hours, one Drew Barrymore movie,
    and three bags of chips,
    she decided to go home.
    She looked at me, said 'thanks'
    and gave me a kiss
    on the cheek..I want to tell her,
    I want her to know that
    I don't want to be just friends,
    I love her but I'm just too shy,
    and I don't know why.

    Senior year:-
    One fine day she walked to my locker.
    "My date is sick" she said,
    "hes not gonna go" well,
    I didn't have a date, and in 7th grade,
    we made a promise that
    if neither of us had dates,
    we would go together just as 'best friends'.
    So we did.
    That night, after everything was over,
    I was standing at her front door step.
    I stared at her as She smiled at me
    and stared at me with her crystal eyes.
    Then she said- "I had the best time, thanks!"
    and gave me a kiss on the cheek.
    I want to tell her,
    I want her to know
    that I don't want to be just friends,
    I love her but I'm just too shy,
    and I don't know why.
    Graduation:-
    A day passed, then a week, then a month.
    Before I could blink, it was graduation day.
    I watched as her perfect body
    floated like an angel
    up on stage to get her diploma.
    I wanted her to be mine-but
    she didn't notice me like that, and I knew it.
    Before everyone went home,
    she came to me in her smock and hat,
    and cried as I hugged her.
    Then she lifted her head from my shoulder
    and said- 'you're my best friend,
    thanks' and gave me a kiss on the cheek.
    I want to tell her,
    I want her to know
    that I don't want to be just friends,
    I love her but I'm just too shy,
    and I don't know why.
    Marriage:-
    Now I sit in the pews of the church.
    That girl is getting married now.
    and drive off to her new life,
    married to another man.
    I wanted her to be mine,
    but she didn't see me like that,
    and I knew it.
    But before she drove away,
    she came to me and said 'you came !'.
    She said 'thanks' and kissed me on the cheek.
    I want to tell her,
    I want her to know
    that I don't want to be just friends,
    I love her but I'm just too shy,
    and I don't know why.
    Death:-
    Years passed, I looked down at the coffin
    of a girl who used to be my 'best friend'.
    At the service, they read a diary entry
    she had wrote in her high school years.
    This is what it read:
    'I stare at him wishing he was mine,
    but he doesn't notice me like that,
    and I know it.
    I want to tell him,
    I want him to know that
    I don't want to be just friends,
    I love him but I'm just too shy,
    and I don't know why.
    I wish he would tell me he loved me !
    .........'I wish I did too...'

    I thought to my self, and I cried.



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    wowww yar.... what a heart touching story... the same happened to me and still cannot forgive my self...

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    AAhh HELL made heavy tears roll out of ma eyes. You know what those 2 people were idiots. If u love someone u must tell him/her ASAP. But if its too late, then ma friend u can go and commit suicide. SERIOUSLY!!!

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    yes when two ppls are in love
    so they are biggest fools on earth

    well every becomes fool in life
    some once , some many times

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    never w8 b4 its too late..... moral lesson.... thats so sad..... i m in libray rite now... if i start crying everybody will look at me.... so i m posing... excellent post... but sumetimes i wonder why people dont express their feelings what they exact feel for their love ones... i just hate this shyness... say whatever u want... coz life is too short to wait.... its my message to everybody plz dont w8, just go and say if u really really love him/her.... dont cry over spilt milk....

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    nice post
    and nice comments
    way back there is saying of someone in Hindi
    that
    kal kare so aaj kar
    aaj kare so ab
    means that wht u want to do tomorrow do it today
    and wht u have to do today do it now

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    i love this...i've read it before, i actually printed it out and showed it to everyone..its soo nice

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    wow wats the response

    dont tell me yaar , i had really leave the tears in the pearly eyesssssssssssssss

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    ju huna tha wu tu hu gaya... now sum1 tell the treatment yar...

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    zandu balm zandu balm
    pidahari balm
    dil dard, bedard dur na kare
    karo kuch aur intezam........


    hahahhaa

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