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    A Promise To My Love



    I believe that none could love you
    quite as deeply as I do;

    And yet I often fail to show
    the depth of it to you.

    I vow to do the little things,
    to show you every day;

    But one thing or another
    seems to get into the way.

    I pledge to be more open,
    to have courage and be strong;

    But some how fear takes over
    and then everything goes wrong.

    I dream of perfect love for us,
    and hope that it will be;

    And yet I end up giving you
    a less than perfect me.

    I want to be much more for you,
    be everything you need.

    I hope and seek, beg and pray
    "Change me Lord! ", I plead.

    You are the only one I want.

    It is for you I yearn.

    I guess, my love, there's still so much
    that I have yet to learn.

    I cannot give perfection,
    but this I promise I will do -


     


    I will spend my life time learning
    how to give my love to you.



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    nice prose

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    hmmmmmmmmmmm

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    yep

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    kia yep

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    u can never show how much u love a certain thing as much as u do...still it always seems to be less

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    aik dum theek bola hai

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    devil always know value of love coz they can never have it

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    they shud have it

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    Excellent post....its every individule sentence has 2000 meanings in it... i loved it.......thnx 4 sharing

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