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    Has The God Failed?



    He makes his escape in the silence of the night
    He sails his way through
    Looking back, he sees a dim light
    Itís his home; he left, when the pain grew


    He rows his boat ahead
    Where this boy is heading no one has a clue
    In the water he sees reflection of stars
    They look so pretty he wants to dive in and catch a few


    On his way, he thinks about the sufferings of his brothers and sisters
    He feels this world is a mess
    There are cut, scars and blisters everywhere
    And he feels God is on recess

    He has cried their tears
    He has felt their pain
    He has cherished their smile, long gone in vain
    He has seen a few,

    Food is what for which they kill
    He has seen others,
    They have to digest their food with a pill


    Some call it the disparities of life
    Some call it the paradox of life
    Some revolve around the word 'my'
    But only few ask the question why?


    He stops rowing his boat for a while now

    He drinks some water and gathers his thoughts
    He knows he's not a saviour
    But there are some lessons
    He believes, which need to be taught


     


    He looks back
    He can no longer see his home
    He knows he will turn back
    But he wants to capture a glimpse
    Of all that he has ever known


    He rows his boat ahead

    People are so mean, he thinks
    Reflecting upon his own self
    He needs to go back to his home
    Clear his conscience and to prove
    He does not have a heart of stone


    As he moves ahead a few miles
    His vision begins to blur again
    Starving kids begin to die
    Religions draw swords
    All people want is eye for an eye


    He knows he is sailing into the unknown
    He cannot turn back now
    He has to find his answers

    And to wash the sins of his own
    Moon is playing games with the clouds
    Much like his own self
    Heís tired of making transits

    Between his good side and the worst
    He wants to break free from the chains
    The chains which pierce his soul
    His conscience is dirty with stains
    Stains which increase his guilt many fold


    He sees an island at some distance
    He rows his boat quickly towards it
    He believes the island hold his destiny
    Which needs to be fulfilled


    He now stands on the island
    His vision is clearing now
    He has been following all his life
    Now is the time to take a stand


    Everyone is so busy now
    No one has a second for others
    People donít care about anyone now
    Be it their own brothers. sisters, father or mother


    With these puzzled thoughts
    He starts smiling
    He now realized his mistake
    When he fell, he started crawling


    He has to stand
    On his own two feet now
    Break the chains he's holding
    He has to make a difference somehow


    He thinks about his family
    He has to get back to them
    He is missing their love
    He is missing their care;
    To run away from them
    He wonít even dare

    He is finally feeling peaceful
    Maybe it's time to sail back
    He joined his hands for prayer
    But uneasiness surrounded him
    He thought about the sufferings of mankind
    His eyes turn wet
    So far from his home he has sailed
    Only to realise
    Maybe the god has failed....

    P.S. This boy is inside each and everyone of us, we just need to let him sail



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    gr8 effort neer....

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    thanx ma'm

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    this is just gr8....

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    thanx again





    anything else to say than 'amazing or gr8'
    I m desperately waiting

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    hahahaha....golden words....

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    hmm it is
    but its repetitious

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    hmmmm... then wat else u want to hear?my vocablory is too short.... hehehehe

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    no no
    i m not hurling u for anythin
    but i just saw we were same thing again and again and then again.....
    so i thought salutation shud be change..

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    so y not u be the 1st?

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