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    Neer
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    Yes... I was there

    I came to your city, but could not reach your heart,
    I had always wanted my life, to be your life's part.
    I have been destiny's child, going where life took me,
    Yet you were that one person, whom forever I want to see.

    I sit outside your door, hoping you would come out,
    To see what I have become, in your love's draught.
    Waiting for you to invite me into your life,
    And be then my friend, lover and wife.

    I know, in your love, I have become hungry and foolish,
    And there is not much in life that I wish.
    May be have a normal job or even own some farms,
    But should have time to sit on a lake with you in my arms.



     



  2. #2
    hemasnair
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    ur all poems are great Neer.....really. keep it up.......

  3. #3
    Neer
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    Thank you ma'm

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    hemasnair
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    hi...call me name...we all are friends here...

  5. #5
    Neer
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    kkk hema
    right!!!!!!!!

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    hemasnair
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    ya....right...

    have a nice time...Neer.

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    Neer
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    hmmm u tooo
    c ya
    bye

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    Nice thought Neer
    i have seen there are hopes in ur poem
    either ur love has began or u have suffered from love
    either way ur thought are great
    Love from ur side dont expect from others, the Love would be more beautiful
    I have given a big lecture to u Neer
    sorry

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