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    sweety4u
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    FEELINGS..........

    I used to ache inside myself
    In agony with an empty feeling
    Many a time reduced to tears.
    Inside me was such sadness
    From all my shattered dreams
    I felt fear with the doubt
    Of a hundred thousand lies.
    In my bed I lay alone
    In the stillness of the night
    Floating on a sea of darkness
    Searching for a light
    If only I could express the agony
    Of a totally empty heart


     


    Then I started to feel again
    A need just grew and grew
    Slowly coming to life once more
    Longing for a tenderness
    To feel love again
    I hoped with innocence
    That my life could start afresh
    For me to love with the passion
    Of a raging fire untended
    Because I wanted to live
    I yearned to have fun
    To add laughter to my days
    Just need to take little steps
    Until I find myself



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    hmmm... nice poem

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    thnks zara


    I'm runing as fast as i can down the hall
    I trip i stumble i hit the ground hard with each fall
    I can barely see where i'm going but i know the way well
    I've been down it before but i'm not coming back i can tell
    I trun the conner sharp i slam the door
    I go to the deak my tears start to down pour
    I climb over the rail and just hold on for a bit
    screaming on the inside i just can't take it
    I reflect on my life all the pain and abuse
    I just couldn't handle it anymore it's of no use

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    dont have words yaar.... good attempt

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    sober post yar...

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    thnks guys

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    u r always wlcome...

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    pains r given by the things we sometime hold very dear....

    but they can be healed by the things we never thought could do wonders

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    wow..what a wonderful post....

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    hmmmm...

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