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    Drained

    I tried my best to conquer, I tried my best to win
    I thought my mind was powerful, seems its just oblivion

    I'm sorry for the burdens I have laid on you
    I tried my best to see that our love would be true


     


    I had my friends and loved ones once upon a time
    I risked my own sweet life just so you'd be mine

    I have my reasons for being with you
    I wish I could explain it, I'll try to prove it soon

    I used to be so mighty, I used to be so great
    but of course when you came around I lost my

    ruling place. You will not admit it, as you shut me
    up, You are my true copy such mimicking luck

    The stars had crossed our paths yours upon mine
    or perhaps it was something greater, you'll know

    in your own time. And as I lie here weakened by
    your words the Almighty in me will repeat itself

    before I turn into one of your works, You always
    tell me you're the best as you brag and gloat

    I see my strength being drained, as a zombie I
    will mope. Like for everyone else, I am your true

    source, You rely on me, although I'm dumb and weak
    I shall show you someday, I will make you see. And

    when I do recover, and be the great one I truly am
    I will love you forever and ever till the end.



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    Nice poem Ryu...keep it up...

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    so u r in love>????????

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    it think so, coz he is posting more inspiring materials these days...

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    yeah rite? I am just typing out whats gettin in my mind

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    Wow, Beautiful words

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    ache hai na?

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    Han hai mene jo likhe hai

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