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    BROKEN PROMISE



    You told me you loved me
    I told you I loved you too
    You said together we'd always be
    I said I would be true

    You promised you would hold me
    You promised you'd be there
    I promised I'd cross the stormy sea
    To give you my loving care

    But you never kept your promise
    You aren't the way you used to be
    You just gave up on us
    And you just gave up on me

    You said let's take a break
    You said let's just be friends
    But please for my sake
    Just say the truth, cause it's the end

    You promised every day
    That you would be there
    You molded my heart like clay
    Into the shape of a broken chair


     


    You promised to me
    That we'd always have our love
    You said to me
    I was all you could think of

    But, now, your walking away
    Saying "let's just be friends"
    Now, you made my heart break
    That's your way of saying it's the end

    Why did you make a promise you couldn't keep
    Why did you make a promise you wouldn't live up to
    Why did you make a promise that was so cheap
    why did you make a promise to this broken hearted fool

    Why did you promise we'd be together
    Why did you say you dreamed of me in your sleep
    why did you promise to love me forever
    Why did you make a promise you could not keep?



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    thats is soo nice..sweetie are these ur poem..cuz there really really nice

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    if they r really really nice, it doesnt mean these r mine..... hehehehehe..... just copy and paste... u know....

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    lol..yea the old fashion way..hehe

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    i aint that intelligent... but i love to read good, and decnt poetry of any catogery like love, inspirations...etc

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    well ur posts are truly awesome..thats wht i do at time..just go online and search poems..i sometimes write them too...

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    hmmmmmm... for who?

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    ohh no..just write for the heck of it..i listen to some nice music and then start writing..my sis and cousine thought i was inlove, i was like for god sake im writing for the heck of it, not cuz im in love..

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    then u shud be in love...hahahahaha... coz u r collecting alot of stuff to share with him.... clever gal... just kidding

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    hehe yup thats how we do it..hehe..and now i got u for more tips..aint i lucky...

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