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    Me and myself … 1203 -2k13


    As we watch the drifting clouds
    Me and myself, a lonesome consign
    Together we gaze and gape
    woven intricate nature’s design

    hold us confounded simpletons
    web and weft of so many bands
    we see but we know not
    the decent of hour glass sands

    no handkerchief ready to
    pick trickled drop from our eye
    no hand to caress tender softly
    as in unison we exhale our sigh

    pebbles we fling out at dusk
    tinkle and clink with passing time
    fading our echoes and waning light
    slowly edge closer to an eternal rhyme

    burnt hulk from meteoric strike
    a silent scream unheard so loud
    echoing somber rip and tatter
    of a soundless shadowy shroud


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    12th Mar, 2k13
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    beautiful poetry





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    Quote Originally Posted by rabia iqbal rabi View Post
    beautiful poetry
    thanx pal
    encouraging kind words


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