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    coolestnapster
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    Heart Touching

    Heart Touching...

    I was a just-born and she was Twenty-Five,
    Though we were we, we were one.
    I would cry out in Latin and she would respond in Greek,
    I would learn nothing but she never got tired to teach.

    I was surrounded by monsters eager to pull my cheek,
    but they would vanish the moment I was wet and weep.
    She would come running and hold me in her arms,
    as if I had won the contest of the charms.


     


    Now I was able to walk and chew,
    and hey, I was two.
    I and she could now understand each other,
    I was her everything and she needed no other



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    hemasnair
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    Hi...Good concept.......and fantastic execution! well done. keep it up.

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    coolestnapster
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    hmmm

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    unnikrisb4u
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    good one

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    coolestnapster
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    my pleasure

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    Great ! is that ur own????

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    hemasnair
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    no way its carbon copy....hey na sunny........hi?

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    coolestnapster
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    ya hema is right its just a copy me not that good to write such lines

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    the beauty of a mother is in her heart..deep down you'll find love and forgiveness..really sweet post...

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    coolestnapster
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    ....for ur comment

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