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    Full moon … 3009-2k12


    As I pensively
    the pictures scroll
    Through the window
    a chiseled doll

    flickers the vision
    of far off eyes
    to my lonesome heart
    lend soulful sighs

    draw my senses
    waft on clouds
    amid the shades
    and stifling shrouds

    eyes silent speak
    a riot is sent
    as a rainbow too
    is shyly bent

    a lonely blade
    on a barren dune
    mute silent stands
    in a rakish moon


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    saadat tahir
    30th Sep, 2k12
    Islamabad.


    The moon here is full today, and the desert with its myriad mirages… Haunting! Difficult!


     



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    Beautiful poem.......

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    Quote Originally Posted by rabia iqbal rabi View Post
    Beautiful poem.......
    thanx rabia...it is so encouraging

    kind o yaz

    cheers

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