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    Shades of green 2209-2k12

    My shirt too is a shade of green
    It lacks the perk and glitzy sheen
    Wish Icd wash and do a preen

    The stripes on it are a lovely hue
    Why I wonder it wasnt my due?
    Why is it available to just a few?

    I too walk, same bricked street
    Rosy cheeks and tender my feet
    Why the trash can is my beat

    Just as I touched a parked bike
    The owner rushed in to strike
    Much less own I cant even like

    Many a times I passed this shop
    The vendor wont allow me stop
    Faintly sigh and my brow I mop


     


    Someone! Throw just such a shirt
    Oh! Will I be able to clean the dirt?
    Shall I never be weaned from hurt?


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    saadat tahir
    22 sep, 2k12
    Islamabad.



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    good poetry sadaat

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    Quote Originally Posted by mahima View Post
    good poetry sadaat
    thanx mahima...blessed be...!
    and errr my name is saadat...

    cheers

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    kia kehnay , muqarrar

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    Good poetry......

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    Quote Originally Posted by admin View Post
    kia kehnay , muqarrar
    bohat shukria janab,,

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    Quote Originally Posted by rabia iqbal rabi View Post
    Good poetry......
    thanx rabia....kind of u to read and comment

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