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Thread: The Lonely Feeling Un-explained.............................

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    coolestnapster
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    The Lonely Feeling Un-explained.............................

    again yet another poem from my collection

    The Lonely Feeling Un-explained.............................
    by Napster(me)

    my life was a dark room,
    with no doors and windows,
    still i could hear the voice of thunder.

    i was living there without any hope
    every second was killing me slowly
    days went by with my heart screaming

    tears fell like they were in a rush,
    smile seemed like a sweet dream crushed.

    everyone thought that i was a king
    living my life with plenty of things


     


    no one knew that my soul had died
    when my face refused to smile..



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    sweety4u
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    sad poem da

    expressed in a simple way..................nice da

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    coolestnapster
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    don't know but just felt like writing so wrote

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    sooooooooooo goooooooooooooooodddddddddd
    really very nice poem..............
    n secially these lines ................i like them the most....................cos have undergone frm such conditions...........................


    "my life was a dark room,
    with no doors and windows,
    still i could hear the voice of thunder.

    tears fell like they were in a rush,
    smile seemed like a sweet dream crushed.

    no one knew that my soul had died
    when my face refused to smile.."





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    coolestnapster
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    ya came from direct dil se.....and how u felt like this and why can i know reason...

    coz u find very less people who feel same...


    wrote one more sad poem but i can't post it as i only started crying after reading it......

    thanks for ur valuable comments

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    hmmm............well m a weird personality thats why...............................hey sunny will u plz send that poem to me............

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    coolestnapster
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    nope i can't anyways send u some old poems me leaving bye

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    ok..............fine............

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    mee too a weird personality and the reason i can't give u is that it is full of pain and sorrow

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    its ok........yaar..............

    good n bad time comes n goes
    but our life never stops...................

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