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    Baisakheoun pe bahaar.....FATA ka dard

    Saleh Mohd...19 yrs…lost his legs in FATA
    He was not particularly despondent.
    One day in the hospital I was hurrying to join the twitter at the tea bar.
    Through the corner of my eye I saw him in the corridor, alone on his wheel chair. Deep in thought, nose pressed against the fogging window pane….a swath of denuded trees, rusty and dusty pointing bare accusing fingers at the sky!
    I just stopped... walked up and touched his shoulder...he was shaken out of deep thought and as I said some meaningless comforting words... his forced smile disappeared and he just melted…!!


    Spring on crutches


    fields dancing in the wind
    the buds and flowers too
    I see the grasses velvet hue
    the blooms refreshed with dew

    I want to caress them tenderly
    like I wish to be with you
    your presence like the blossoms
    delicate and softly bosomed


     


    my love is here and true
    like the wishes I have for you
    scented, sweet, alive and strong
    you will always carry my heart along

    like an ever smiling flower...
    blue cheery sky for our cover
    little birdies twitter in the sun
    and the air too whispers fun

    lonely remains of innocent dreams
    a happy family now rests in realms
    hudled and one day blissfully slept
    silently upon them hellfire crept

    Cant no more, a roll in the grass,
    or feel the tangy tufts of moss
    With my legs I’ve lost the toss
    cant touch natureâ?¦or you...alas!

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    saadat tahir
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    From personal files



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    good poetry

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    Nice one !
    Thanks.

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    Quote Originally Posted by admin View Post
    good poetry
    thanx a lot

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    Quote Originally Posted by carefree View Post
    Nice one !
    Thanks.
    thanx carefree
    kind words

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