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    Can you see it in my eyes?

    You don't know how I'm feeling.
    I have yet to vocalize
    Desire deep inside me.
    Can you see it in my eyes?

    I tremble when I'm near you
    Heat travels up my thighs
    and I want you with an urgency
    That I just can't describe.

    Dare I reach out to touch you?
    Do you think you'd realize
    How much I want and need you?
    Can you see it in my eyes?

    I long to say, "I love you,"
    But am scared of your reply.
    Terrified like a child
    I've become paralyzed.

    The camouflaged emotions
    Lead to pain and silent cries.
    And yet I just can't tell you.
    Don't you see it in my eyes?

    Confessing through this poem
    My dilemma summarized.
    The feeling's quite cathartic,
    But will lead to my demise.


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    gd 1

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    wow.....sweety no words to say hw nicely you hav discribed ur dilema........really appreciable!

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    what to say sweety really feel like its coming direct from heart

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    I cannot express like you can do it...

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    ..good one...

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    thanks to all buddies

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