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    She was not beautiful. Nothing about
    her was extraordinary. Nothing about
    her made her stand out in a crowd. She
    grew up in a family of six and being
    the eldest, she learned responsibility
    at an early age.

    As she grew stronger and brighter, she
    instilled a sort of light and cheer to
    whomever she met. She was not
    beautiful, but she made others feel
    better about themselves. She meets a
    rebel boy who thinks he is all man,
    befriending him, she teaches him. She
    teaches him how to read and a little
    boost, the 'man' needed to go to
    college, they become fast friends and
    she fell fast in love with her rugged
    handsome student.

    The 'man' then finds himself in love
    with a girl. A girl who was so
    beautiful. Her hair was a hallow of
    light around her. Her eyes the bluest
    blue of the ocean. 'Like an angel' he
    tells his tutor 'like a beautiful
    angel.' The girl swallows a lump at
    her throat. She was not beautiful, she
    did not posses the heart of the one he
    loved, but she did not care. As long
    as he was happy, she would be happy,
    or so she tried to. She helped write
    the most beautiful letters to his
    angel. All the time visioning it was
    she herself receiving those very
    letters. And so the girl helped him
    choose the right clothes, say the
    right words, and buy the right gifts
    for his angel.

    His angel brought him much joy and
    much pain to the girl who cried behind
    her smiles. But that never stopped her
    from giving more than she will ever
    receive. Then one day, the angel he
    loved left him for another man. A
    richer more successful man. The boy
    was stunned. He was so hurt, he did
    not speak for days. The girl went to
    him. He cried on her shoulder and she
    cried with him.

    He was hurt and she was too. Time went
    by and so wounds heal. The boy
    realizes something about his friend/
    tutor. Something he never realized
    before. How her laughter sounded
    heavenly and how her smiles brightened
    up the darkest days, or how simply
    beautiful she looked to him!

    Beautifu l. This plain, simple girl was
    beautiful to him. And he began to
    fall. Fall so in love with this
    beautiful girl. On one day, he picked
    up all his courage to see her. He
    walked to her house, nervous, and
    fidgeting, Running his thoughts over
    and over his head.

    He was going to tell her how beautiful
    she was to him. He was going to tell
    her how wonderfully in love he was
    with her. He knocked. No one was home.

    The next day, he found out that the
    beautiful girl he fell in love with
    had a brain tumor that put her into a
    coma. The doctors were grim and the
    family decided to let her go.

    One final time he got to see her. He
    held her hand. He stroked her hair and
    he cried for this beautiful girl. He
    cried, but it was too late. The
    beautiful girl was buried and the
    heavens broke. Out a beautiful spring
    shower, a cry for their loss. She was
    the most beautiful girl in the world
    and she had taught the rebel boy-man
    to love and what it is to be loved.

    She was the most beautiful girl in the


    Look around. Aren't there a lot of
    plain faces? Take a good look. A real
    good look or you might just miss out
    that beautiful person.

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    all 3 of us have same thoughts

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    Yeah....Birds of the same feather, folks togetherů

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    It's not cool or coolest-

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    Wah amitkadmawala, thanks you so much for the compliment....glad you like it.

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