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sweety4u
09-11-2007, 10:25 PM
My heart aches
Missing you
And wanting to
Scream out your name
Into this vast space where we first met
This place that brought us so close
Is also what makes it so easy to separate
To lose track of you in between casual conversations
And witty quips sent racing through wire
Through time and space
From heart to heart
Until
One day you're no longer there
And I have to face the truth
That this really hurts
And I really felt
Because what we thought was just a game
Became ever so real
And you were what kept me smiling
And hoping
And now that you are not there
To share
Or laugh
For me to cling to at the end of a long day
When I need to reach out
This is when I feel the ache
The incredible void
This hole in my heart
That used to be filled by you

54321
09-11-2007, 10:28 PM
thnx to say abt me .............lolz

54321
09-11-2007, 10:28 PM
not abt me but for me........lolz joking

sweety4u
09-11-2007, 10:35 PM
thanks yar

sweety4u
09-11-2007, 10:37 PM
its not for uuuuu, not joking

lolz

ha ha ha

54321
09-11-2007, 10:38 PM
:smt005 :smt005 :smt005 not for me

coolestnapster
09-12-2007, 07:26 AM
nice one...for me it looks like u wrote it for hrithik..lolz.... :smt005 :smt005

sweety4u
09-12-2007, 04:29 PM
no devil,u r wrong

thanks

D_only_one
09-12-2007, 04:32 PM
nice poem sweety.....

ash2032
09-12-2007, 07:41 PM
Nice one sweety

sweety4u
09-13-2007, 01:08 PM
thanks to dino and ash

shalin_99
09-13-2007, 01:51 PM
nice poem sweety

Rastha
09-13-2007, 02:42 PM
He will b very lucky Sweety!
Gr8!

sweety4u
09-13-2007, 03:18 PM
OHHHHHHHHH NICE COMMENT I LOVE IT
SO SWEET RASTHA

hemasnair
09-19-2007, 09:11 AM
Dont ask Sweety how dangerous and painful are such hole in heart..........!!!

Good one..

sweety4u
09-19-2007, 11:04 AM
ok hemas
thanks da

shalin_99
09-19-2007, 12:25 PM
nice...one...

koumudi
09-19-2007, 10:46 PM
NICE.KEEP POSTING BYE

maxjeolite
09-19-2007, 11:16 PM
vryy heart
touchyyyy sweetyyyy
abt dosthiiiiiiiiii!!!!!!!!

sweety4u
09-20-2007, 02:09 PM
thanks guys

naturalelegance
09-22-2007, 07:06 PM
nice one...sweety take care... :-)

sweety4u
09-22-2007, 10:07 PM
thank u sunshine

chugh
09-23-2007, 12:24 PM
good post...

sweety4u
09-24-2007, 11:25 AM
thank u chugh