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sweety4u
08-31-2007, 03:02 PM
U always said we could be together,
and we were,
on that roof top at midnight just laying next to u,
u would look at me and i would stare back,
but now im on the roof top again,
with noone but the wind,
it sends chills down my spine and cold memorys,
i want u to come back,
with the warmth ur gaze could leave me in,
all the memories good and bad,
are all better than this,
and being all alone without u,
i just want to be with u,
but i guess i really had no choice,
cuz u left me standing in the rain waiting for u,
i stayed there til 1,
thinking u would come around,
but when u came u just told me and then left,
i fell to my knees,
and i cryed all night long,
i should have known,
that sumthing was wrong,
but now there is no way i can fix it,
u said it was my fault,
but if it really was,
wouldnt u give me a chance to atleast try one more time

Devil12911
08-31-2007, 03:12 PM
nice...

maxjeolite
08-31-2007, 06:51 PM
vryyyyy nice one
kind n calm request to frnds
vry touchyyyyyyyyy
sweetyyyyyyyyyy

coolestnapster
09-01-2007, 01:08 AM
so sweet.....

sweety4u
09-01-2007, 09:26 AM
thanks u guys

am_alive
09-03-2007, 09:54 AM
Nice one

naturalelegance
09-04-2007, 05:19 PM
the emotion of this peace of poetry is conveyed well...:-) anyways thankyou and take care...