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Solcius
09-23-2008, 11:43 PM
I don't know how to say this
without sounding dumb
but i hate when you act
like your emotions are numb
I know somethings wrong
but you refuse to say
as if your too strong
to not be OK..
Was it something i did?
something i said?
the more it stays hid..
the more i wanna be dead
I can see through your eyes..
Your drowning inside..
as you silence your cries
and make your pain hide
just tell me please...
What did i do?
Did i go too far with my tease?
Or forget to say "I love you"?
Why must you be so proud?
Acting like your made of steel..
Are you just afraid to say it out loud?
And let the wound heal?
skrew it..I give up..
Your too damn stubborn
i got a life to live up
as you make my eyes burn..
I don't know my mistake
But WHATEVER it was
I hope these two words will take
so it doesn't hurt like it does
I'm Sorry.

hemasnair
09-24-2008, 07:20 AM
hi....wonderful theme!

sveetzara
09-24-2008, 07:21 AM
good poem ryu

Solcius
09-24-2008, 08:32 AM
Thanx Dynamic Dual

sunnyajmal
09-24-2008, 08:53 AM
very nice Ryu...keep it up man!!!

sveetzara
09-24-2008, 11:35 AM
sunny he isnt a man like u r.... hes sveet cute child of 16

sunnyajmal
09-24-2008, 11:45 AM
hahahaahh....nice reply

Solcius
09-25-2008, 08:04 AM
Thanx Zara I am really moved by ur words

sunnyajmal
09-25-2008, 09:17 AM
Ryu tum ess ke baato mai mat aana...

sveetzara
09-25-2008, 10:43 AM
thanx ryu.......

sunnyajmal
09-25-2008, 10:55 AM
hmmmm... teak hai teak hai