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sveetzara
09-19-2008, 01:31 PM
You told me you loved me
I told you I loved you too
You said together we'd always be
I said I would be true

You promised you would hold me
You promised you'd be there
I promised I'd cross the stormy sea
To give you my loving care

But you never kept your promise
You aren't the way you used to be
You just gave up on us
And you just gave up on me

You said let's take a break
You said let's just be friends
But please for my sake
Just say the truth, cause it's the end

You promised every day
That you would be there
You molded my heart like clay
Into the shape of a broken chair

You promised to me
That we'd always have our love
You said to me
I was all you could think of

But, now, your walking away
Saying "let's just be friends"
Now, you made my heart break
That's your way of saying it's the end

Why did you make a promise you couldn't keep
Why did you make a promise you wouldn't live up to
Why did you make a promise that was so cheap
why did you make a promise to this broken hearted fool

Why did you promise we'd be together
Why did you say you dreamed of me in your sleep
why did you promise to love me forever
Why did you make a promise you could not keep?

Haily
09-19-2008, 01:38 PM
thats is soo nice..sweetie are these ur poem..cuz there really really nice

sveetzara
09-19-2008, 01:42 PM
if they r really really nice, it doesnt mean these r mine..... hehehehehe..... just copy and paste... u know....

Haily
09-19-2008, 01:46 PM
lol..yea the old fashion way..hehe

sveetzara
09-19-2008, 01:51 PM
i aint that intelligent... but i love to read good, and decnt poetry of any catogery like love, inspirations...etc

Haily
09-19-2008, 01:52 PM
well ur posts are truly awesome..thats wht i do at time..just go online and search poems..i sometimes write them too...

sveetzara
09-19-2008, 01:57 PM
hmmmmmm... for who?

Haily
09-19-2008, 01:58 PM
ohh no..just write for the heck of it..i listen to some nice music and then start writing..my sis and cousine thought i was inlove, i was like for god sake im writing for the heck of it, not cuz im in love..

sveetzara
09-19-2008, 02:00 PM
then u shud be in love...hahahahaha... coz u r collecting alot of stuff to share with him.... clever gal... just kidding

Haily
09-19-2008, 02:01 PM
hehe yup thats how we do it..hehe..and now i got u for more tips..aint i lucky...

hemasnair
09-19-2008, 02:01 PM
heart touching....and mouth sealing....

Solcius
09-20-2008, 09:15 AM
Promises are meant for breaking but not when they are not supposed to break

sveetzara
09-20-2008, 10:17 AM
promise promise hi hota hai...promise kero to poora kero werna promise kero hi nahi... kiya zaroorat hai kisi ki feelings sey khelney ki?

Solcius
09-20-2008, 10:38 AM
promise promise hi hota hai...promise kero to poora kero werna promise kero hi nahi... kiya zaroorat hai kisi ki feelings sey khelney ki?

Kya baat hai WOW Great yaar...........We got a Prosecutor of Oppostion here. Nice to hear those strong words