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sveetzara
08-28-2008, 11:46 AM
Revenge
Broken hearted,
Feeling blue,
Sad story,
But it's true,
Things you've said,
Seem unreal,
Someone tell me,
Whats the deal?
It's me you love,
That I know,
It's her you with,
Is it so?
I know this hurts,
It may get rough,
But you can do it,
Your heart is tough!
But YOU can't,
Your mind is weak,
So another girl,
Is what you seek,
Affection that-
I cannot give,
But without love,
You cannot live,
Without love,
Your heart turns cold,
But I'm not there,
For you to hold,
You knew this from the start,
You'd only have me,
In your heart,
I'm stong,
I will be fine,
Cause in the end,
REVENGE is mine!

sunnyajmal
08-28-2008, 11:56 AM
very nice post yar.... at the end revenge is mine...

sveetzara
08-28-2008, 12:05 PM
haan na

hemasnair
08-28-2008, 12:37 PM
uphhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh.................heart aching!

sveetzara
08-28-2008, 12:38 PM
hmmm.... aik lerki hi itna kuch face ker sakti hai

coolestnapster
08-28-2008, 01:05 PM
so much pain....will not add more ine already so much pain...
pain should be reduced not increased :smt003

hemasnair
08-28-2008, 01:34 PM
hmm..sahi kaha apne...If you cant share anyones grief..better you dont try to increase it's volume...!!!

sveetzara
08-29-2008, 05:43 AM
hmmmm.... so i m quiet coz this pain is so heart aching..... and hema i agree wid u..... u r just an angel

sweety4u
08-29-2008, 09:01 AM
i think this poem should have votes cause it don't take up much words just a simple person telling us about themselves!

sveetzara
10-08-2008, 12:27 PM
hmm... rite sveety

Candid
10-08-2008, 07:10 PM
Assalaamalaikum
By the way the other one is also a girl
why no one sees that

sveetzara
10-09-2008, 06:47 AM
mager pehley us lerkey ney is lerki ko kiun pyaar kiya? thats the thing to think about....

sunnyajmal
10-09-2008, 09:10 AM
hmmmm....kuch tu hai..