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sweety4u
12-29-2007, 12:06 PM
In the distance a voice speaks
I recongize it from our fights
about little misunderstandings
about big disillusions

And I hear your surpressed anger
but what can I do more than cry
If I couln't expect this

In a blur I hear you say
that you wat to give everything up
That you'll take everything with you
That is dear to me in this life

I listen to how your words
Slowly turn into sentences
That strike me like lightning
With destructive force
This .... drives me crazy
And this feeling is frightening
but your words go on
And my eyes look questioning

Why hadn't you told me earlier
That you estranged from me
Why did you talk about love
When you never loved me

I'm losing to despair
And I feel my tears burning
And I wouldn't want anything more
Than my head in your hands

But what until an hour ago
Seemed so save
Is a real big lie
And appeared to be a cardhouse
it's like someone else
Took over your body
And I haven't even noticed it
That the person entered
To erase your love

And destroy my world
Will nobody tell me
That I dreamed everything

...................................sweety

special thanks to sunny who suggest me this poem name as" Sometimes It Is not What all It Appears To be "

coolestnapster
12-29-2007, 01:04 PM
hmm no thanks to me ...but all credit to u for writing such a beautiful....poem :smt002

shalin_99
12-29-2007, 02:35 PM
nice share

hemasnair
12-29-2007, 06:38 PM
Nice one Sweety....and Nice topic Napster..! Always be like this...let one write and other name it.......!!!!

sweety4u
12-31-2007, 01:46 AM
thanks to all :smt006 love u..............

shalin_99
12-31-2007, 10:14 AM
cheers da..!>!