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naturalelegance
12-23-2007, 06:35 AM
..Sometimes you fall in love with people, who don't feel the same way about you..you can give your trust, love and friendship, only to have your heart broken, and your trust displaced. If you are ever in a similar situation, you know how it feels to be used...


..I Was Reminded...

As we lay there quiet
I was reminded of all the reasons why I lust you
Your smile,
and the way it teased at me seductively
Your laugh,
and the way it tempted me
Your eyes,
and the way they seem to hypnotize me...

As we sat there silent
I was reminded of all the reasons why I love you
Your smile,
and the way it brings such life into me
Your laugh,
and the way it makes everything okay
Your eyes,
and the way they seem to read my thoughts...

As we stand here now
I am reminded of all the reasons why I hate you
Your smile,
and the way it confuses me
Your laugh,
and the way it seems to mock me
Your eyes,
and the way they can look into mine and not feel a thing..

coolestnapster
12-23-2007, 08:31 AM
Your smile,
and the way it brings such life into me
Your laugh,
and the way it makes everything okay
Your eyes,
and the way they seem to read my thoughts...

nice post well done

hemasnair
12-23-2007, 06:40 PM
hmm...nicely expressed.

shalin_99
12-23-2007, 07:39 PM
Ah!
Its awesome

naturalelegance
12-24-2007, 05:52 PM
..:-D..im happy to know that you all liked it...

sweety4u
12-25-2007, 02:32 PM
vowwwwwwwwwww

OH MY GOODNESS. THIS POEM WAS SO GOOD I HAD A TEAR COME DOWN MY EYE. ITS CRAZY THE WAY SOMETIMES FRIENDSHIPS TEND TO BRING CRAZY FEELINGS OUT AND WHEN U LEAST EXPECT IT THAT OTHA PERSON MIGHT JUST FEEL THE SAME FOR U. BUT ANYWAYS AWESOME POEM :smt006

naturalelegance
12-26-2007, 06:05 PM
..hmmm sweetuuu...can i say that it really kinda touched you....thankyou and yes you are right...true...anywyz take good care... :smt039 :smt039