PDA

View Full Version : Alone



ash2032
12-14-2007, 10:48 AM
by Ladycat

A star hits and fades
As love soon does in my heart
Another then another
I toss them aside
They go back to their computers and video games
I find that I'm always second to a machine
They buzz and whiz and swirl
They don't give the love that I do or can
I am still alone with that urge to kill the machine

Let it stop and have time for them to know me
And me know them
I am still here
All alone
No one to love
No one to love me the way that I love in return
Spend a lifetime to compete with a machine
Spend a lifetime with ones who don't love me

I think that I'd rather just be alone

shalin_99
12-14-2007, 10:48 AM
Nice one ....!! :)

sweety4u
12-14-2007, 10:49 AM
This poem is totally great
nice post ash

hemasnair
12-14-2007, 12:56 PM
nice post da...

Vidya Palani
12-14-2007, 01:13 PM
good one

naturalelegance
12-15-2007, 04:29 AM
..nice one...

coolestnapster
12-16-2007, 11:16 AM
hmmm ash ...so many kool poems...nice ..posts yaar