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ash2032
12-14-2007, 10:39 AM
by Brier

Sitting alone in a quiet corner,
Looking out at the people in the room.
To have just one of them notice me,
Would break down this solitary tomb.

Such a tomb have I created,
So sturdy, so tall, so secure, so strong.
I used to think this was where I belonged,
But I get the feeling I may have been wrong.

Why have I chosen to live like this?
The answer, my dear, evades even me.
Perhaps because I think it is safe,
Or perhaps it's because they won't let me be.

Have you ever built a wall around you?
Encased yourself in an impenetrable shell?
Sometimes it may feel like it is right,
When actually you're trapped in a prison cell.

But now you're a captive, just like me,
You're stuck inside of it, can't you see??
No matter how you plead, no one listens,
Can't you hear me? I'm screaming, "Please! Help me!"

shalin_99
12-14-2007, 10:41 AM
nice one ash!!! :)

hemasnair
12-14-2007, 03:39 PM
Come....Am listening you...hihi!

Nice post...ash!

naturalelegance
12-15-2007, 02:22 AM
..:-D..hmmm..its about loneliness na...good one ash..!

coolestnapster
12-16-2007, 11:19 AM
why ur poems r speaking out loud od lonely persons...r u okay