View Full Version : Like A Dream

10-25-2007, 04:26 PM
Here I sit, thinking only of you
Wondering what is to become of us
Understanding all you have been through
Hoping to slowly gain your trust
My heart aches for you, and also I yearn
I want to understand you
In hopes that I will learn
Your unique and special qualities amaze me
Your smile
Your mind
Your voice and its beautiful sound
Your eyes
Your hair
Your ability to cheer me up
When you see that I am down
My feelings for you go beyond that of words
And at first it didn't seem real
But that just taught me a lesson
In doubting what I feel
It seems I dreamed you into life
And the reason for my stare
The bluest sky
The deepest sea
Don't even compare
Becky, you're so very special in every single way
And thoughts of you
Run through my head
Every hour of the day
I hope that you will understand
Just how I feel about you
I want to be your guiding hand
For all that you go through

10-25-2007, 07:39 PM
nice :) one ash...:):)

10-25-2007, 08:04 PM
Ash...dont post all the best ones at one time dear...really feeling as flying in ur fantasies.....really...that much ur creations are enticing..!

10-26-2007, 09:41 AM
thanks shalin & hema sorry to say these r not my creations but defintely my thoughts in some others words..................

10-26-2007, 01:21 PM
Ash....so nice to ur honesty.......so let me say...Poet so nice...!

Keep smiling ash....bye take care

10-26-2007, 06:19 PM

10-28-2007, 10:26 AM
All I can Say is WOW! This is such a beautiful poem! I love it! Thank you for this because sometimes you can't explain exactly what you're feeling or thinking and this is perfect for what I'm feeling and thinking

10-29-2007, 01:49 PM
really sweetu that means u found words for your feeling i m glad for that

11-08-2007, 09:28 AM
hmm nice ....ya giving words to the feelings that can't be explained