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sweety4u
10-21-2007, 06:06 PM
You don't know how I'm feeling.
I have yet to vocalize
Desire deep inside me.
Can you see it in my eyes?

I tremble when I'm near you
Heat travels up my thighs
and I want you with an urgency
That I just can't describe.

Dare I reach out to touch you?
Do you think you'd realize
How much I want and need you?
Can you see it in my eyes?

I long to say, "I love you,"
But am scared of your reply.
Terrified like a child
I've become paralyzed.

The camouflaged emotions
Lead to pain and silent cries.
And yet I just can't tell you.
Don't you see it in my eyes?

Confessing through this poem
My dilemma summarized.
The feeling's quite cathartic,
But will lead to my demise.

unseenforce
10-21-2007, 06:08 PM
gd 1

hemasnair
10-21-2007, 06:16 PM
wow.....sweety no words to say hw nicely you hav discribed ur dilema........really appreciable!

ash2032
10-21-2007, 07:34 PM
:) what to say sweety really feel like its coming direct from heart

shalin_99
10-21-2007, 08:24 PM
I cannot express like you can do it... :smt005 :smt005 :smt005

naturalelegance
10-22-2007, 05:32 PM
..good one... :-)

coolestnapster
10-22-2007, 07:16 PM
kool

sweety4u
10-23-2007, 11:44 AM
thanks to all buddies