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sweety4u
10-11-2007, 02:40 PM
empty and alone
thats all i know
just a void in a endless life
a blank page in a written book
always leaving me empty and alone
unloved and unseen by the world
all i am is alone
with no friend to care for
not a tear or a word
can explain how i feel
all i really know is that
my heart is impenetrable like steel
with nothing to feel
but loneliness and pain

ash2032
10-11-2007, 03:28 PM
u r not alone i am there :) always

sweety4u
10-11-2007, 03:44 PM
i know tat buddy thanks

ash2032
10-11-2007, 03:50 PM
u r welcome :)

unseenforce
10-11-2007, 03:52 PM
hey
im sorry but the poes doesnt suit u
u have the whole nidokidos with u
how can u be lonely ?
dont ever say that

sweety4u
10-12-2007, 08:50 AM
hey
im sorry but the poes doesnt suit u
u have the whole nidokidos with u
how can u be lonely ?
dont ever say that

i know buddy all r with me .................... :smt001 but sometimes loneliness kills me............................
thanks gaurav

hemasnair
10-12-2007, 08:50 AM
Poem has a heart of a lonely person who is sitting in the midst of a deep crowd...Ya....

Sometimes we feel Such a blank loneliness even in the midst of a crowd!!!!

We feel as we are the only one who is sitting and creeping as a snail...and the whole world is running without minding us.....!!!

As an empty Jar...we hear only silence...only silence....Only echos of this deep silence..!!!!!

So well expressed in this poem U sweety..

sweety4u
10-12-2007, 08:51 AM
Poem has a heart of a lonely person who is sitting in the midst of a deep crowd...Ya....

Sometimes we feel Such a blank loneliness even in the midst of a crowd!!!!

We feel as we are the only one who is sitting and creeping as a snail...and the whole world is running without minding us.....!!!

As an empty Jar...we hear only silence...only silence....Only echos of this deep silence..!!!!!

So well expressed in this poem U sweety..
so sweet comments hemas & u r right
thanks dear

coolestnapster
10-13-2007, 02:00 AM
hmm u r right sweety it feels lonely...but u can avoid it share it with frnds....trust them....u will feel light

sweety4u
10-13-2007, 10:13 AM
ok devil

coolestnapster
10-13-2007, 12:08 PM
well tell me if it works

sweety4u
10-14-2007, 09:22 PM
i will

coolestnapster
10-14-2007, 11:21 PM
i''ll wait for the reply

shalin_99
10-15-2007, 06:03 PM
nice post sweety

sweety4u
10-15-2007, 07:11 PM
thanks my dear bro