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ash2032
10-09-2007, 03:16 PM
The Knowing Sea
by Mikol Khol


The tide comes in, and moves back out
Like your chest rising and falling
To the melodic rhythm of your life

In the mist of the sea's dew
I see the future of our understanding love
Two young friends discovering the truth

Sand and shells shift underneath
Realizing the changes that have taken place
I know now . . . where my heart belongs

sweety4u
10-09-2007, 03:20 PM
nice poem ash
ur poems makes my day perfect

ash2032
10-09-2007, 03:27 PM
Once again sweety credit goes to poet not me :)

sweety4u
10-09-2007, 03:53 PM
no yar,my credit goes to u coz u the one post this here otherwise how can i read this :smt001

hemasnair
10-10-2007, 10:29 AM
really woderful post....

Let the poet takes the credit Ash, but let us appreciate you for posting such a nice poem which is inspiring us to hav such a nice day...So you too hav equal credit my dear...

Have A nice Day beauty..

ash2032
10-10-2007, 05:52 PM
Thanks hema u r so nice :)

shalin_99
10-10-2007, 05:53 PM
good post

ash2032
10-11-2007, 04:33 PM
thanks shalin

shalin_99
10-11-2007, 05:58 PM
ur welcome ash

coolestnapster
10-13-2007, 02:07 AM
hmm ashu...i don't know how come u post such posting which r close to life....nice one