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10-09-2007, 03:16 PM
The Knowing Sea
by Mikol Khol

The tide comes in, and moves back out
Like your chest rising and falling
To the melodic rhythm of your life

In the mist of the sea's dew
I see the future of our understanding love
Two young friends discovering the truth

Sand and shells shift underneath
Realizing the changes that have taken place
I know now . . . where my heart belongs

10-09-2007, 03:20 PM
nice poem ash
ur poems makes my day perfect

10-09-2007, 03:27 PM
Once again sweety credit goes to poet not me :)

10-09-2007, 03:53 PM
no yar,my credit goes to u coz u the one post this here otherwise how can i read this :smt001

10-10-2007, 10:29 AM
really woderful post....

Let the poet takes the credit Ash, but let us appreciate you for posting such a nice poem which is inspiring us to hav such a nice day...So you too hav equal credit my dear...

Have A nice Day beauty..

10-10-2007, 05:52 PM
Thanks hema u r so nice :)

10-10-2007, 05:53 PM
good post

10-11-2007, 04:33 PM
thanks shalin

10-11-2007, 05:58 PM
ur welcome ash

10-13-2007, 02:07 AM
hmm ashu...i don't know how come u post such posting which r close to life....nice one